train of thought

Category: Writers Block

Post 1 by sacrificial angel (Generic Zoner) on Saturday, 24-Oct-2009 23:16:06

I realize these may have some incoherence to them. That's what happens when you simply let your mind go.

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TIME

What seems to be millennia can be measured in hours
so I believe the force of time plays God in this reality
if the darkness doesn't clame you, time will at some point in the forever
the inexorable wheel of time will turn unimpeded by thought or action
in this world, your powerless, face it.
something the egotistical human race will never admit
even to itself.

and as my life ticks awayI wonder what I'm doing with it
already mourning the past at such a young age
what will I be in 20 years. 30? 40?
will what I do matter?
or will I be another one of the nameless forgotten
washed away and drowned in the sea of time.

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The Disguise of Sanity

The myriad guises of society hide the true depravity of us all.
the darkest corner of the human psyche denied by most
which never shows itself in those you deem sane
as outward happiness so often masks inner despair
and outward calm so often conceals inner turmoil
and innocence goes hand in hand with evil
so maybe it is those you deem insane and shum who are correct.
just because their reality is not yours, does not make them wrong
and they are right, what is reality anyway?
it is the normal ones, the sane ones, the nice little conformists who follow societies close-minded rules without question
it is they who are wrong, who need help
they are afraid
hiding from themselves, they are terrified of the truth
a truth already embraced by so many
but we are ignored.

Post 2 by metal angel (Help me, I'm stuck to my chair!) on Sunday, 25-Oct-2009 19:30:38

Wow! the last one is so true! very nice work! smiles.

Post 3 by Remy (I've now got the silver prolific poster award! wahoo!) on Sunday, 25-Oct-2009 20:41:24

Pretty rganized and rational for a rambling mind. Certainly truth in there. I can't really comment on form or any of that given the means by which it was written, but it is something to ponder.
Guardian

Post 4 by Striker (Consider your self warned, i'm creative and offensive like handicap porn.) on Monday, 26-Oct-2009 11:19:59

Ah, So I asked if there were any more and like majic, they appear.
Keep shareing, nice work.